Obviously the sky is lovely, but I think you need more than that. I like the steeples, but it bugs me a bit that there is no foreground.

The beautiful clouds colliding with the city is simply seductive. Also, the moon adds a very nice touch. I give this all 5's, excellent work!

Ratings:

Relevance - 2
Impact - 3
Composition - 2
Technique - 3
Image Quality - 3

Way too much detail for a zen concept. Think about what a Japanese "zen garden" looks like....very simple, some nice smoothed rocks with monotone sand raked perfectly around them. Not a lot of intricate detail. Bother the ground and sky are crowded with intricate detail here, which is fine, but not zen.

On the composition, it almost balances well, but then the bright white over-exposed moon throws it off. also the large rectangular rooftop at the bottom of the frame is not a good element, because it is so different from the scale of the other building elements in the image. It overwhelms them. Finally, the wide angle lens has caused the left steeple to visible "lean" into the center of the shot. Steeples are something that should be vertical, or if you chose to do this on purpose, totally not vertical for artistic effect. Here, it just looks like you didn;t notice the lens distrotion.

From a higher vantage point, and centered further to the right in this scene, this image would be better.

Beautiful sky.

awesome sky