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Response to Windows and Doors (Response #65)

Uploaded 568 Days Ago by Ana - 20 comments

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ajcoutinho said 568 days ago:

Interesting idea, but a little dark IMO, Some contrast/brightness would help.

gazdi said 568 days ago:

Windows and doors, shown as is, what a pun!

philippe said 568 days ago:

The idea is great. I'm not sure about the composition.

uncommondepth said 568 days ago:

I wish there was a category for originality, because I'd certainly have given you a 5 for that! My only complaint is that the lighting could have been a bit better. It's quite flat and you can see the light leaking in at the top. Otherwise, good job!

Ana said 568 days ago:

how else would you have composed this one, philippe? would love to hear your ideas.

psychodudu said 568 days ago:

A wonderful idea, but the quality has suffered a little for some reason.

kpaul said 568 days ago:

nice!

Dave_Mac said 568 days ago:

By far the most orginal and relevant shot I've seen in this theme.

Ana said 568 days ago:

There IS a category for originality, it's just called something else!
That's where "impact" comes in! "Does it make a significant impression?"

moodeous said 568 days ago:

Great idea! You deserve props for being clever and creative. I like this. The lighting is a little dark, but its really fun!

Ana said 568 days ago:

Thanks moodeous! It was fun to build, tough to shoot!

philippe said 568 days ago:

I'm sorry, Ana, I didn't to upset you, I just said I was not sure (I understand this comment can be upseting,though...). If I had the same game I could propose you my version ;O)
Also, I still wish we could rate creativity, because for me, it's different from impact.

Ana said 568 days ago:

I'm not upset, really! I just want to know what you would change about how this is composed. That was my lowest score, so the rest of the folks must agree. I'd like to know how to change the composition to make it better. How would you shoot this to make it better?

philippe said 568 days ago:

For one thing, I would crop it on all sides, and I wouldn't leave empty spaces at the top. As for the way the pieces are displayed, it's a matter of taste, really, and I would have to try the game myself to see if I can make something out of it.
The other thing is: I said I would rate differently impact and creativity. I would give you a five for creativity because you're the only one who can do something like this. One the other hand, I think it would need something more (don't ask me what) to have a great impact. Maybe a human presence that would give a perspective...

Montage said 568 days ago:

Very, very cool idea. 25 from me.

Ana said 568 days ago:

Hey, thanks Heath. I thought it was pretty cool, myself. Heh.

But mostly it was good fun!

Montage said 568 days ago:

Ana- and that's what it's all about :)

Perseida said 564 days ago:

So creative!
Congratulations!

Ana said 564 days ago:

Thank you! Like I said, it was great fun!

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