I see where you were trying to go with this shot. A little more water might have ended up being more dramatic. Right now the micro-droplets seem distracting, as does the flag pole in the background. good composition though.

This is an interesting shot for this serie. Ok, but, The background do not satisfying me. Maybe those people perturbe me.

I like the concept of this shot very much but I find I'm very distracted by the background. Perhaps if the shot had been taken from a lower angle, pointed upward at the sky the distracting background would be avoided.

For me the background is too distracting