Works with the theme but I would have focused on one wagon.

not really getting that this is very relevant. perhaps a tighter shot of the train to the front right here with a little more detail to it, etc. might have helped... i like trains though. live half a block from a set of tracks in a historic downtown area and trains just feel like home...

i like how the eye travels through this photo. and the red train car is pretty striking!

One reason I like this photo is because I like trains, and I think many people do. One of my rejects for this theme was a recently uncovered, old sign on the side of a building advertising train service from Dallas: "St. Louis in 23 hours!"

That's the feeling I get from these abandoned rail cars that will probably never see St. Louis again.
Nice work.