I like the composition and lighting in this. The B & W is nice .

I don't quite see how this fits the theme. Composition is alright, but I feel there's too much empty space. I'd also prefer if we could see what she's looking at. At the moment this photo doesn't really impact me in anyway.

another shot in which I'm not sure what is being seeing. Looks like a girl with an ipod? is there something sinful in that?