I would have liked this more if you photographed this using the centre line of the phones to create nicer symmetry, but not a bad shot.

I'm ambivalent about this image. On the one hand I like the reflections on the metal casing with the play of light inside the casing. On the other hand I am not sure why you chose to PP this by leaving the bush (on the left) and car (on the right) when there is so little color in any of the background features. My eyes keep darting to those bits of color rather that staying on the phone. Perhaps you intended that reaction. It's a bit distracting in an otherwise fine photo, IMHO.

What cool telephones. It's a little blown out, but in some odd way it works. The coloration and treatment is highly unnatural, but that works for this image. Not bad at all! Wondering what this might have looked like from a lower angle...

I love the starkness of the background

Nice design but I would have prefered it a bit closer cause the background is not so interesting.