She kinda gets lost in there, but that's makes this kinda interesting, so not sure that's a bad thing. I do wish there was a little more light on her face.

16 bucks for an old belt? No wonder she looks dazed.

Again, this looks like something that Life would publish. I would really like to see it in black and white though, with a bit more contrast.

Although she's a bit lost in all that clutter, my eyes went straight to her, so high marks for composition!