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Response to One half (Response #43)

Uploaded 382 Days Ago by Monika - 7 comments


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flipthom said 382 days ago:

Great concept and well executed, in my opinion. I just wish that the bottom portion of the shoe weren't clipped off at the bottom of the photograph.

CaptureThis said 382 days ago:

Half a pair of shoes.

I think the composition could be better. Even just not having the heel of the shoe cut by the frame would help. I think a more interesting perspective as opposed to from nearly directly above. Maybe a little more dramatic lighting for adding impact and interest. The green carpet is kind of dull.

Wow I hate to be so critical. I hope I do not offend you with the amount of criticism I have for this one. I really think it is a great idea, but it could have been better executed. I did give a high mark for relevance.

Ana said 382 days ago:

half a pair..I get it. But gosh, the impact isn't very high. You cut off the bottom of the shoe, and the fake grass doesn't compliment this much.

pursang said 382 days ago:

Good concept, but the execution could benefit from composition that offers more space around the single 'half' shoe.

Beamer said 382 days ago:

OK take on the theme. Poor framing.

Lange said 382 days ago:

Nice overall. I wish the heel was not cropped out however.

kadenajack said 381 days ago:

Good take. I just wish we could see the whole shoe.

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