i wish this weren't as bright, had more detail and showed more of the typewriter! i like that the focus is on those things..um tape holder things? but i wish i could see more!

It took me a while to figure out what I was looking at. The platten on the typewriter was not immediately identifiable as such to me because the keys were out of focus.

Nice image, overall, but I am not sure if the DOF has helped with the relevance or hindered it.

Cool idea. Just seems a little too blown out for my taste.

okay, I LOVE this shot. The keys out of focus with the actual roller in focus. I am a huge fan. I might like the keys to be a little more in focus, but at first glance you're not sure what's going on, and then to realize what it is... very nice. And in this day and age a typewriter is definitely considered old. Very relevant. Very nice shot... only thing I might do is straighten it a tad so that the lines go straight across the shot. Love it. Just love it.