Don't really see how this relates to old age to be honest, it doesn't grab me. Personally, I don't like how much black space there is-- maybe you could have tired including more detail from teh window?

I like the concept but feel the execution lets it down. There is not enough detail in the stained glass for me with areas where the pattern is lost totally...maybe deliberate?

nice graphic effect

A simple, clean and nice composition, but it's one of those weird times when I think colour is needed given the subject.