I really like that you are showing her age, but the colors are too vivid.. I would have turned down the colors just a bit, but awesome shot....Ray

The relevance is good and composition is interesting, although the image has unnatural, seemingly forced contrast and looks digitally oversharped, bringing the impact down.

Very relevant but it seems to be a bit overprocessed. The brightness of the white shirt on her arm just overwhelms the shot and takes away from it.