I'm surprised no one has left a comment for you, which totally sucks. Well, here's mine...for what it's worth...

The idea is cool. The birds in the foreground with the streak of a distant jet in the back...seemingly cutting the center bird in half!

To me the noise doesn't seem to offer much to the image. It's the kind of shot where I'd like more detail, rather than less...which is what happens with noise.

Being minimal in subject matter, it's also the kind of shot that can be quite difficult to get "just right" (if indeed there is such a thing as "just right").

Tighter in with more detail might have rendered a more compelling story.

I do get the feeling the jet is zooming by!

The noise could have more relevance to the photo construction itself.

Otherwise, it reminds me of a famous erwitt photo. call me a erwitt-addict! :)