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Response to Negative Space (Response #243)

Uploaded 554 Days Ago by Ashish - 12 comments

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kadenajack said 554 days ago:

That's where I put my beer! Nice use of negative space.

reality said 553 days ago:

i rated this high 5's. perfect triangle flow for my eyes.

King said 553 days ago:

Okay, give me a hint: This photograph says x about y?????

Sorry, you seem to have made me think we were at the beginning of the theme and I was in a bad mood about the vagueness of the theme and what I think are gimmicky attempts to gain relevance by loading up on meaningless extra space around the subject.

Ignore me, please. I'm being rude. I'm sorry.

King said 553 days ago:

But Ashish...you're such an excellent photographer. This image doesn't live up to your impeccable style, in my opinion (and, of course, I say the same thing about many of my own images).

CraigMartin said 553 days ago:

This seems to be the theme for product placement :-)

duncmc said 553 days ago:

Fits the theme, but the tab end (bottom right foreground) annoy me.

Ashish said 553 days ago:

Thanks everyone!

@King: I don't think you are being rude, i appreciate all the things you say, whether good or bad as i rate you very highly for your creative work. About the image, i wanted to capture the beer bottle and the cigarette bud (its on the bottom right) and this was one of the compositions which turned out well .. the rest were awful ;-)

King said 553 days ago:

Ashish,
I was rude. Candid, but rude.
Thanks for being tolerant of an old man's ramblings.

SeekingFocus said 553 days ago:

Is this a commercial? I'm really not sure why, but I like this one. Plenty of tiny details to keep the interest.

I wish there was a bit more detail in the top of the wall though.

SeekingFocus said 553 days ago:

I would have to say I feel like this captures Ashish's style quite well. If there were just a bit of texture visible in the white part of the wall it would really help. I think that's about all that's missing to really fill in the blank here (at least for me) with the beer bottle and the cigarette.

swoozie said 553 days ago:

Like it, but,without the bottle, it would have better impact...IMHO.

Ashish said 553 days ago:

Thanks Jason! Totally agree about the flat wall, would have been great it it wasn't newly painted ;-) And thanks for Night theme!

@Swoozie: Thanks for the comment! I am not sure what you mean by "without the bottle" as for me, that is the subject.

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