great use of repetition and color

Pleasant colors and forms but seems to be missing something which I can't put my finger on. Maybe it's not coming across as all that different. I'm the first to admit I'm not much help. Sorry.

I like slinky abstractions. One thing I would have done is smoothed out those specks and marks on the plastic...but that's just cosmetic. I also would crop that bottom left corner of black, I don't feel it adds anything important.