cute idea, but you could have done a few things to change the impact. First off, take something like this outside without flash, a wider shot of her whole body would be great, and have more moving more.

nice expression but, the shadow is distracting

Cute picture but the overall quality is poor. Harsh lighting. Looks more like a shot from a cell phone.

I would have cropped this more off the bottom. The pink clothing in the lower left is distracting. This might have been a good time to bounce the flash. The dark shadows just behind the oranges are not very attractive.