Interesting juxtoposition, but it is unfortunate you didn't have better light. Also, in terms of compositional nits, I think the structure on the left is too close to the edge. But I like the ideas.

You know, I took almost the same shot a few days ago (great minds?). I got better light than you though. This looks a little flat, and Im pretty sure it'll get low relevance - not everyone will know its an architectural model

wow .. this is extreme, love it. i wish you can see more light in here.

Strange mix of architecture, very unique. I like it.