This is both very good and very funny. As someone who is probably very important in your life, she doesn't look particularly thrilled to be posing for you, or doesn't look thrilled with you in the least at that particular moment. Either way it adds a sense of playfulness. I might have played with the composition a bit, moved her off center but it is still a very good shot.

Someone looks a bit impatient,or bored.
This is some fine work.I would say this is from a pro,but the border stumps me!

I'm not sure how relevant a studio portrait is, unless this is someone that means a lot to you, but I like the lighting, pose, and framing of the shot. Great job.

Love the expression. She's kind of floating there, though...a little unnerving. Maybe she could be placed little farther right in the frame?

Great portrait. The composition feels like it needs to open up just a little more on the left. Great marks tho...

She seems a little bored, and while I think technically this image is strong, good lighting, sharp, nice contrast.. its doesn't pop.

Nice, the expression seems just a bit forced.

This is a good portrait, very honest - she doesnt seem to be happy to be in your life though..