Woo, the first image that even makes me think of ghosts! Would have been better if it was at night time, but I guess everything can't be perfect. Composition is good and impact is alright, but I think you could've done a bit of work on her.

I like the idea!
I'm not sure if that's the right atmosphere. Maybe it sould be a bit darker or b/w.

The 'ghost' seems to real, or not spooky enough?

i don't like the way you "included" the ghost. ghost is too sharp to me.

I like the scene and the composition you've set up here. There are many opportunities for some dramatic impact here that I think you are missing. I might have the female stand in the same pose as Jesus and have her being pulling up into heaven...or she could be imploring Jesus for another chance at life (she looks young). She's striding toward the [whatever it is] and it seems to me that she should be leaving.

Nice work, regardless.