I would have straightened the horizon, cropped out that shadow and maybe lightened the sky a bit.

Love this one. But if the image on the left can be cut, it will be more powerful image.

j'aime bien cette création visuelle, et son parti pris radical... juste cette ombre en bas à gauche qui me gène un peu..

im sorry, i dont see much extreme about this photo, seems rather like a stock b&w. your vertical horizon is off as well.

dont mean to sound too harsh.

Needs to be straightened, check the ocean horizon.

I like this very much (but the uptight part of me would have liked the horizon straight)...

Tilted horizon and the shadow on the lower left corner are keeping this from being a really good shot. Very powerful lines.

Theres contrast here, but Im not sure what youre showing me. The deserted road, or the light on the sea?