Great idea except the shadow is a bit distracting.

I love this one. The thumbnail doesn't do it justice, glad I clicked on it. The focus seems a tad off but love it anyway.

I like where this photo is going, but I don't think it quite gets there. It would have been better with a portrait orientation, working with the whole rain idea. And I think his pose is to casual/uncomfortable for this type of shot. He seems like 'someone is making me hold an umbrella' to me. A good creative idea.