Great detail in the eyes here. I do think there is a bit too much empty space on the right, and that it throws off an otherwise very effective composition. If it were me, I'd consider cropping at the bottom to just below the neck on the bottom, and ever so slightly to the right of where the smoke ends on the right.

Perfect in every way for a dramatic portrait.

The combination of the expression, tone, composition and smoke put it all together for me. A great image.

Great composition and exposure and lighting -

Brilliant portrait. What a fantastic job with the eyes.

Very nice!

It's all in his eyes. Smoke is nice added touch. tight crop works too!