The light beams may have been dramatic at the time the image was made but the image itself doesn't represent it very well. The sky is blown out and the foreground elements aren't interesting enough to hold my eyes away from the distracting blown out sky.

I like how the rays of light burst out from the sky and the background of the scene. But I'm not sure about the distraction on the left side of the image. I'd ask myself though: if the intention was to frame the subject would it have added to it? Would it change the subject if I removed it? Just my two cents.

The lighting is dramatic but a bit harsh for me.