Response to Curves (Response #68)

Uploaded 595 Days Ago by CraigMartin - 10 comments

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groen65 said 595 days ago:

nice tones, but the vegetation in the foreground is distracting.

Ana said 595 days ago:

curve of the wall, curve of the track, curve of the tunnel. Aside from the annoying twigs in the front (which I realize you probably couldn't avoid!) this is great!!

Flatline said 594 days ago:

It's a nice picture, but ultimately there's too many branches in the way for my liking. It's just too busy.

King said 594 days ago:

I like trains and arches and curves, so this shot has everything I like...but it has a lot of distracting things pokeing into the shot as well. Now I want to see the train.

XXIVXXV said 594 days ago:

a curve in the tracks.

psychodudu said 594 days ago:

It's really not such an original take on the theme, and however good it is, it will lose out on the impact it creates amongst onlookers. Great job though!

Scarf-Face said 594 days ago:

Very nice shot, my only complaint is that I think the image would have been more interesting and "tight" if it was smaller on the vertical scale (not cropped, but if you took it from a lower physical vantage point, making the curve of the tracks take up more than 1/2 of the height).

mitchh said 594 days ago:

I like the composition and it fits the theme well. The tones are pleasing and suited to the image. I do not like the dead brush, especially that intruding from the foreground. Perhaps you could have stomped the foreground brush down before setting up your camera?

CraigMartin said 594 days ago:

Thanks all for the comments. I agree regarding the foreground bush, but I wasn't able to get to it or around it to fix the problem.

@Scarf-Face, thanks for the suggestion. I will mull that over - these are the kind of constructive comments that I think makes WS so worthwhile.

King said 594 days ago:

@Scarf-face
All other things being equal, lowering the camera would reduce the area of visible track. Perhaps you meant "higher."

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