Response to Colour Thread (Response #24)

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Ana said 242 days ago:

I See the blue. I would have cropped off the top right below the red light, and maybe on the right to get out that pink on the edge.
Otherwise, very nice.

shonacole said 242 days ago:

Ana, thanks for that. I did go and crop the pink and clone out the red as you suggested and it is much better. This WS is a great exercise!

Lange said 242 days ago:

Very nice colors and textures.

Montage said 242 days ago:

I like how the perspective leads the eye along the bench and through the shot. Nice work.

Beamer said 242 days ago:

This is a thread of color, yes!! Nice motive, nicely captured. I gave only one lower mark, for compo, feels like it needs a bit more headroom.

Beamer said 242 days ago:

Or, maybe less headroom as Ana said...?

shonacole said 241 days ago:

Thank you all,
Ana & Beamer:
the original photo had more headroom and it felt to me like it was not as focused on the bench enough. then when I was cropping it I wanted to leave some blue sky in to go with the theme. Beamer, I think if you saw it with out the red light and the pink person on the right I think you would be happier with it.
thank you for taking the time to give suggestions, I think you have helped improve the shot :)

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