Exposure and treatment doesn't flatter the subject.

Nice fun capture. Where is your flash? My first though was if the flash had been bounced it would be better but then I realized that the hat would be in the way. Still a very nice capture.

Very poor.

Looks like on camera flash snapshot. Converting to b/w does nothing for it. Noisy and poor tones.

looks like they were having a great time.

She certainly looks like she is having fun. I'm thinking the drink is helping her get relaxed for the camera. Very nice work.