Ditto my last comment: For this Theme: I think the framing is way too loose. There are great things going on here that if framed really tight could become very "Abstract".
This would probably also work very nicely as a B&W, especially with a diff framing/cropping.

I think this is a bit lacking on impact. Nice idea though.

gosh, I hope that's not playground equipment!

A much closer crop would have been better, part of the shot is out of focus and it's very cluttered.